Thank you for your very professional redo of the letter. It totally fits my request.Shalom....
An announcement letter, one written in a straight forward and concise way, informs a reader of news or events quickly and easily. A positive announcement letter is short, inviting them to the point. It demonstrates desire to maintain a personal or business relationship, to build morale, confidence, loyalty and goodwill. An announcement letter is an opportunity to build good relationships and promote your business. If the information in your announcement letter is clear and complete, you will not have to worry about questions later. If the announcement is bad news, it should be a direct, no-nonsense statement tempered with understanding and optimism. It's tone should be considerate and respectful.
Mary F. Jury
I grew up in Phoenix, Arizona, where I now live. My education covers a variety of areas that include accounting, computer programming, medicine, writing, office and management. At present, I am a self-employed Virtual Assistant and Medical Transcriptionist that works from home. I work for various companies utilizing my writing skills to write letters and articles that are posted on the Internet. I am also an Herbalife distributor.
Here, on Letterrep, you will find some of my generally formatted letters. If you find one that will fit your needs and would like it to be personalized, please do not hesitate to contact me.